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9.1 mismatched masquerade

mismatched masquerade stop. You've made a good catch. It's a celestial globe tossed out an attic window. you're here sitting in a chair again. no past, no future. focus. you've had no idea what it is....

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Like the last stanza very much.

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I think this is very good. Lots to love. Just needs a bit more development.

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Feels like the creative process has captured you here.

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Like a found treasure on Antiques Roadshow. Galapagos and the ship Adam reminded me of the Adam and Eve in Vonnegut's book, Galapagos; although, your poem and Vonnegut's story are completely...

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Thanks, all!I'd like to develop this one.I'm having trouble finding time the last severaldays to write and won't be home tonight or Tuesday.Hopefully I'll catch up at least on reading the...

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yes, it captivates. You'll get back to it. Or it to you.

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